Friday, December 5, 2008
My reading essay
The young man's main problem is that he wants to learn how to carve elephants. For example, the young man asked the old man to teach him how to carve elephants. Another example, is that the young man only learned how to carve stone so he had to stay one more year to learn how to carve elephants. A third example, is that he did not get to learn because he did not see the elephants in the stones. Clearly, the young man's main problem is that he wants to learn how to carve elephants.
The problem was resolved by the young man staying one more year to learn how to carve elephants. For example, the young man asked the old man to teach him. Another example, is that he stayed the next year to learn. A third example, he did not get to learn because he did not see elephants in the stones. Evidently, he stayed one more year to learn how to carve elephants.
A prediction that will most likely happen in the young man's future is that he will become famous like the old man. For example, he wants to learn to carve elephants exact like the old man. Another example, he like how the old man carve elephants. A third example, the young man already know how to carve stones like the old man. For that reason, the young man will become famous.
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5 comments:
Dear Amy
I like your blogs post because the picture matches your story
the best part is when you explain and gave example
one suggestion is to put a period at the end of your sentaces
Dear Amy, i like your blog post because i like your picture cause the picture is of a elephant and the story is about the thas why i like your post essay.
Sincerelu, Suleny
Dear Amy,
your story is good because it explained well what the story is about.
Dear Amy
I like your blog post because it was so good and interesting. The best part was the first paragraph. one suggestion is nothing because it was so good
Sincerely
Tammy Bernardez
Dear Amy,
I like your blog because its very cool.The best part is the pictures its so cool
sincerley,emily torres
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